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A circle of response : addressing the tensions of teacher response to student writing

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Title A circle of response : addressing the tensions of teacher response
to student writing
Names Carothers, April D. (creator)
Tolar Burton, Vicki (advisor)
Date Issued 2008-07-30 (iso8601)
Note Graduation date: 2009
Abstract What students need most from instructors’ written response on their texts is
commentary that evokes a sense of exchange. Teachers often believe that their job is
to point out the deficits in a student’s paper and help eliminate those deficits. While
this is a part of the function of response, it should not be the primary goal of feedback;
rather, students need comments that will help them gain a sense of themselves as
writers who are accepted into the college writing community. Grounding the argument
in the scholarship of response, this thesis develops an approach to teacher response
that narrows the topic into three problem areas: the tension between responding to
content issues versus responding to the distraction of surface error; the tension
between promoting mastery of academic language versus encouraging development of
student voice; and the tension between the reality of teacher authority and the
teacher’s desire to empower students to take charge of their own learning. The
author’s purpose is to clarify the goals of response as well as the act itself in order to
help eliminate the confusion and frustration inexperienced instructors may feel when
they respond to student writing. New teachers and experienced teachers who are new
to writing intensive courses should find this thesis to be a useful guide to responding
to student writing.
Genre Thesis
Topic response
Identifier http://hdl.handle.net/1957/9270

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